Command Knife
Posted By admin on February 28, 2009
Command Knife
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wat yo think of this ?star plz if u like it?
You touched my life
With your softness in the night
My wish was your command
Until you ran out of love
I tell myself I'm free
Got the chance of livin' just for me
No need to hurry home
Now that you're
hook
Cuts like a knife
How will I ever heal?
I'm so deeply wounded
Knife
Cuts like a knife
You cut away the heart of my life
When I pretend
Wear a smile to fool my dearest friends
I wonder if they know
It's just a show
I'm on a stage
Day and night I go through my charades
But how can I disguise
What's in my eyes?
I've tried and tried
Blocking out the pain I feel inside
The pain of wanting you
Wanting you
I think it's lovely! You are very creative.
This poem is freestyle. If you want to write more advanced poetry, try to use a syllabic pattern (so that each line has the same number of syllables, for example). This will give your poems rhythm. Also, try selecting a form of poetry, like the sonnet, or the tanka, or the cinquain.
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